Sonja, so many perfect visuals, a weaving of tasks, like a leaf colliding gently with this world and maybe another —falling through until it joins the others—I love how your guidance flittered about, I loved its patience, and I’m in love with the ending line!
Thank you so much for your comment! A comment that feels like a poem in itself! I am so grateful for your presence here.. and very happy that you enjoyed this piece :)
Gimme some more - don't stop there.
Currently harvesting all of my poems about writing poetry/being a poet hehe stay tuned!!
Absolutely beautiful. Poetry's beauty comes from how there's no right way for it be be written. My favorite poetry is the type that's felt 🩵
Thank you so much for your kind words! I love that about poetry as well.. so much creative freedom to expand and just have fun!
“watch as the words begin to breathe.”
— Swoosh!
(that’s my word for excellence, BTW,)
Sonja, so many perfect visuals, a weaving of tasks, like a leaf colliding gently with this world and maybe another —falling through until it joins the others—I love how your guidance flittered about, I loved its patience, and I’m in love with the ending line!
So beautifully done, thank you!
Thank you so much for your comment! A comment that feels like a poem in itself! I am so grateful for your presence here.. and very happy that you enjoyed this piece :)
I did.
Love love love ✨
thanks so much, lovey! 🩷
everyone’s like gotta go read again k thx bye, same. it’s so beauty.
yall are making me BLUSH heheeh oh my, thank you so so much!! <33
*screaming crying throwing up*
hard agree with @mike. gotta go read it again OK thank u love u bye
you're making me do this exact face 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 love u!!!
This is beyond amazing. Gotta go read it again OK bye.
Oh my gosh thank you!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
So fun, true, and somehow practical! Might use this with my 9th graders. Gotta figure out the how and when. Thanks.
Ohh yes, let me know how it goes if you do!!
Ahahahahaaha this is so good please write a whole piece like this thank u
Thank you so much for reading it! I appreciate you for being here 💖💖💖