This is a clever idea! And you’ve executed it in a way that doesn’t detract from the meaning a traditional poem would convey. Your tone is very strong here!
Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback as I found it challenging to honour the prompt while also trying to make it a good poem 😅 thanks so so much 🙏🏼
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it 💗 I found the prompt to be difficult in a fun way haha - trying to avoid sounding repetitive or predictable when using only questions 😅 are you gonna give the prompt a whirl? so happy you liked it!
did you ever
actually love me? or just how
i made you feel? if we had met
earlier, would anything
be different?
loveeee this
I appreciate you reading it! I’m so happy that you loved it - that means a lot to me <3
God i love love love this
Omg I’m so glad you found itttt! Thank you!
love this!!!
Thanks so much for reading it! So many questions always
This is a clever idea! And you’ve executed it in a way that doesn’t detract from the meaning a traditional poem would convey. Your tone is very strong here!
Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback as I found it challenging to honour the prompt while also trying to make it a good poem 😅 thanks so so much 🙏🏼
"why does it feel like everybody is in on a secret and I'm late to the punchline?" 🖤
It really feels like that lately ahaha 💗
I really like this thank u
That makes me so happy to hear! Thank you for reading it 🫶🏼
This is an awesome prompt!
And your piece was exquisite 👏🏽
I loved this line in particular:
“do i look older than i am, will i be warned before my last droplet of youth spills?”
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it 💗 I found the prompt to be difficult in a fun way haha - trying to avoid sounding repetitive or predictable when using only questions 😅 are you gonna give the prompt a whirl? so happy you liked it!
You're very welcome and I think I will!
It might be a bit before I do, and hopefully I don't forget, but it seems like a ton of fun!
beautiful as always 🤍
Eeeeep! 🫶🏼 thanks for reading it! 🥹
This one hit me right in the feels! Especially the crying when angry - I feel seen.
it drives me nuts like i just wanna be angry 1 time without crying lol.. or my voice quivering. but i'm glad i'm not alone in it lol i see youuuuu <3
Oh yes! Like why do my eyes start the waterworks 😂
the maps, heart, moon lines are my favorite section. Thank you!!!
"will I be warned before my last droplet of youth spills?" ooff I feel this 🥺🤍 love this piece!
thank you for reading my dear!! <3