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Terra Incógnita's avatar

did you ever

actually love me? or just how

i made you feel? if we had met

earlier, would anything

be different?

loveeee this

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sonja ringo's avatar

I appreciate you reading it! I’m so happy that you loved it - that means a lot to me <3

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Leisly Ann's avatar

God i love love love this

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sonja ringo's avatar

Omg I’m so glad you found itttt! Thank you!

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Bella Blue Bloss's avatar

love this!!!

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sonja ringo's avatar

Thanks so much for reading it! So many questions always

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Emily Brighton's avatar

"why does it feel like everybody is in on a secret and I'm late to the punchline?" 🖤

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sonja ringo's avatar

It really feels like that lately ahaha 💗

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Alex Moreno's avatar

I really like this thank u

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sonja ringo's avatar

That makes me so happy to hear! Thank you for reading it 🫶🏼

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Jamal Robinson's avatar

This is an awesome prompt!

And your piece was exquisite 👏🏽

I loved this line in particular:

“do i look older than i am, will i be warned before my last droplet of youth spills?”

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sonja ringo's avatar

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it 💗 I found the prompt to be difficult in a fun way haha - trying to avoid sounding repetitive or predictable when using only questions 😅 are you gonna give the prompt a whirl? so happy you liked it!

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Jamal Robinson's avatar

You're very welcome and I think I will!

It might be a bit before I do, and hopefully I don't forget, but it seems like a ton of fun!

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Luna Rose Ferguson's avatar

beautiful as always 🤍

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sonja ringo's avatar

Eeeeep! 🫶🏼 thanks for reading it! 🥹

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Jenna Nicole Stevens's avatar

This one hit me right in the feels! Especially the crying when angry - I feel seen.

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sonja ringo's avatar

it drives me nuts like i just wanna be angry 1 time without crying lol.. or my voice quivering. but i'm glad i'm not alone in it lol i see youuuuu <3

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Jenna Nicole Stevens's avatar

Oh yes! Like why do my eyes start the waterworks 😂

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Stephen Ringo's avatar

the maps, heart, moon lines are my favorite section. Thank you!!!

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Andrea Aldrete's avatar

"will I be warned before my last droplet of youth spills?" ooff I feel this 🥺🤍 love this piece!

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sonja ringo's avatar

thank you for reading my dear!! <3

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sonja ringo's avatar

Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback as I found it challenging to honour the prompt while also trying to make it a good poem 😅 thanks so so much 🙏🏼

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